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Nismo_Freak
25-04-2004, 08:40
http://www.240faq.com/brm/brmflyer.jpg

It's a flyer I'm making for a friends company for the SE-R convention here in the states.

Any comments? ideas? complaints?

FYI, they won't ship to the UK, so no need to scream free advert.

Leon
25-04-2004, 08:45
Looks good chap.
Just a few comments:

top right corner of the graph, there's a white bit that sticks up. To me looks a bit out of place.
For some reason, even tho the header says cat back exhaust and there's a list of features, I didn't get the fact that you're trying to sell cat back systems and actually found myself asking "What's this for".
Maybe I'm just dim...

Nice and clean tho, spacious and easily read :thumbs:

Nismo_Freak
25-04-2004, 08:49
Looks good chap.
Just a few comments:

top right corner of the graph, there's a white bit that sticks up. To me looks a bit out of place.
For some reason, even tho the header says cat back exhaust and there's a list of features, I didn't get the fact that you're trying to sell cat back systems and actually found myself asking "What's this for".
Maybe I'm just dim...

Nice and clean tho, spacious and easily read :thumbs:

Ah yes... need to sort that bit along with a little moving here and there.

Cheers for the response.